Yes. I would keep going. Your dialogue is great. I love the descriptions. I usually like fantasy better than hard sci fi, but the characters are so well-written & the set-up so interesting, I'm hooked. I would definitely read, subscribe (already did!), and look forward to continuing the story. The characters are sympathetic, especially Solis. I want to know what happens to them. What kind of flying? Strange and interesting in an underground world. Are we on Earth or some other planet? What's the time context? What does the alarm signify? I want to explore all these questions and find out what happens next.
I’m glad it landed for you! I wish I had the rest of the story written and could get a serial posting schedule, but I haven’t written anything past this point yet.
I feel very good about this start, though. I think this is the way forward for this story. Stick with me, if you’re up for it, and maybe together we can start exploring those questions.
Yes. I would keep going. Your dialogue is great. I love the descriptions. I usually like fantasy better than hard sci fi, but the characters are so well-written & the set-up so interesting, I'm hooked. I would definitely read, subscribe (already did!), and look forward to continuing the story. The characters are sympathetic, especially Solis. I want to know what happens to them. What kind of flying? Strange and interesting in an underground world. Are we on Earth or some other planet? What's the time context? What does the alarm signify? I want to explore all these questions and find out what happens next.
I’m glad it landed for you! I wish I had the rest of the story written and could get a serial posting schedule, but I haven’t written anything past this point yet.
I feel very good about this start, though. I think this is the way forward for this story. Stick with me, if you’re up for it, and maybe together we can start exploring those questions.
I'm in!